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“The pie chart shows the main sources adults use to access news in 2022.”Model answer
177 wordsP1The pie chart shows the main source of news among all adults in 2022.
P2Overall, digital sources, comprising online news sites and social media, were collectively the main choice of most adults, while print was the least used source among the five categories shown.
P3Online news sites were the most popular single source, used by 35% of adults, with television close behind at 30%. Together, these two sources were the main choice of 65% of adults, making them by far the most significant channels. Social media was the main source for 23% of adults, bringing the combined share of all digital sources, online and social, to 58%.
P4Radio and print accounted for much smaller proportions of main-source choices. Radio was used by just 7% of adults, while print represented the smallest proportion at only 5%. Combined, these two legacy media formats made up 12% of the total, just over a third of the 35% share using online news sites alone. The data illustrate a clear preference among adults for online and broadcast channels over print in 2022.
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