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6.5Your position is clear and you stay on topic. The third paragraph introduces a counter-argument; connect it more explicitly to your main claim and develop the supporting reasons in more depth.
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A reasonable range for the topic, held back by collocation slips (“make a damage”) and an informal register choice (“kids”) that can weaken precision and consistency of register.
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Your position is clear and you stay on topic. The third paragraph introduces a counter-argument; connect it more explicitly to your main claim and develop the supporting reasons in more depth.
Four clear paragraphs, each with a topic sentence. But you open two back-to-back sentences with “Moreover” and “Furthermore” — vary or cut one — and a few links feel mechanical rather than meaningful.
A reasonable range for the topic, held back by collocation slips (“make a damage”) and an informal register choice (“kids”) that can weaken precision and consistency of register.
You mix simple and complex sentences well, but subject–verb agreement (“people is”) and the fixed phrase “Despite of” reduce the accuracy of these sentences.
Some people believe that smartphones are damaging social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?
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Moreover, social skills can become weaker because young people spend less time practising them in person. Furthermore, constant notifications make it hard to focus on a single conversation for long. On the other hand, some people argue that smartphones help us stay close to friends and family who live far away. It is true that kids today can call their grandparents easily, but this does not fully replace real contact.
Beyond single moments, smartphones may be weakening the social skills that face-to-face contact once built, as young people now practise conversation far less in person and constant notifications fracture their attention. Admittedly, these devices help us stay close to relatives who live far away, and a quick video call to a grandparent is no small thing. Yet this convenience supplements real contact rather than replacing it, and on balance the everyday losses outweigh it.
Holds a single position instead of conceding mid-paragraph, replaces the doubled linkers, lifts the register (“young people”, not “kids”), and keeps the counter-argument brief before rebutting it.