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“Many people find it impossible to disconnect from their devices, even on holiday. What are the causes, and wha…”Model answer
301 wordsP1The inability to step away from smartphones, social media and email, even during holidays intended for rest, has become a defining complaint of contemporary life. This essay identifies the main reasons for compulsive device use and suggests approaches to restore a healthier balance.
P2The causes lie in a combination of technological design and social expectation. Digital platforms are engineered by teams of behavioural scientists to maximise engagement: variable-reward notifications, infinite scroll and personalised content feeds exploit the same psychological mechanisms as slot machines, making disengagement genuinely difficult rather than a matter of simple willpower. Workplace culture contributes equally: many professionals feel implicitly or explicitly expected to remain contactable at all times, so that switching off a device during annual leave carries a perceived career risk that few are willing to accept. Fear of missing important information, whether professional correspondence or social updates, further sustains habitual checking even when no rational need exists.
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P3Solutions must address both the supply and the demand sides of the problem. Technology companies should be regulated to make disengagement easier: opt-in rather than opt-out notifications, clear daily usage summaries and cooling-off periods built into platform design would reduce compulsive use without requiring users to exercise constant resistance. Employers can establish clear, enforceable boundaries, such as the 'right to disconnect' legislation adopted in France and several other European countries, that normalise offline hours and remove the social penalty for not responding outside working time. At the individual level, deliberate scheduling of device-free periods, combined with physically separating from devices during meals and bedtimes, can gradually recalibrate habits, though such measures are most effective when supported by the structural changes above.
P4Constant connectivity is a product of deliberate design choices, and reversing its effects will require equally deliberate redesign at the level of technology, workplace culture and personal routine.